游记,是中学生感到最难写的一类作文,因为随着游程的行进,耳闻目睹的情景不胜枚举,很难将材料组织得当,往往写成流水账。如何将自己的游程清清楚楚、有详有略的记叙?如何避免将游记写成景点介绍?这些都是我们今天要谈的问题。
国庆长假你是否游历了祖国的名山大川?是否踏访了华夏的文明古迹?是否流连于桂林的山水中?是否沉醉在丽江的灯影里 旅游,丰富了我们的生活,增长了我们的见识。当我们结束愉快的旅程后,烦恼接踵而来。父母和老师往往不会让我们“白”游一场,写篇作文当作“总结”与“汇报”常常成了旅游的“附件”。
最让大家头疼的是旅游涉及的时间长,景点多,如何才能写得不像流水账,又有自己的特点呢?
首先是“舍”。只有学会舍弃,才能有重点的描写。景点太多,一一赘述很难做到详细、具体。只有突出最有特色的地方才能写出特点,写清游历的情况。例如,你到云南旅游,一路走来,昆明的石林、大理的洱海、丽江的古城,还有玉龙雪山,处处皆景。你必须忍痛割爱,选择其中的一个作为写作的重点,其他最多用一两句话带过。只有这样你才能把游历的情况说清楚。
其次是“短”。这个“短”,不是指的篇幅短,而是指文章涉及的时间跨度要短。不要从出发开始写,一直写到全天的游程结束。这样无端生出的枝节会很多,烦扰了自己的思路。就从你到达这个景点写起,写到景点游览结束。时间的集中会有助于你更好地组织材料,突出景点的特色。
再次是“真”。这一点是同学们最容易忽略,也是最能体现写作水平的。很多人以为写游记就是把景点的情况告诉别人。其实不然。游记,就是游历的记录,更强调了自己独特的游览感受。游览同一个地方,大人和孩子的感受会不同,男生和女生游览的感觉也有差异。怎样将自己的独特感受表达出来呢?那就是将自己游览过程中的“发现”写出来。这些发现可以是“摸一摸”“闻一闻”“听一听”“找一找”,甚至是“猜一猜”,也就是把你游览时的所见、所做、所闻、所思写下来。游记最忌讳的就是通篇景物描写,有了自己的活动出现在游览的过程中那才是属于你自己的游览经历。
最后是“趣”。旅游之所以能吸引人,首先就是有趣味。那么,你的游记也要把你在游历过程中感受到的趣味表达出来。这种“趣味”的内涵很广:可以是放肆的玩耍,可以是悠
闲的漫步,可以是滑稽的场面,亦可以是别样的风俗 只要是觉得有意思的就不妨多写两笔,把自己的快乐和大家分享!
掌握了以上“四字”要诀,估计再提笔写游记你就有了一些头绪了吧?
最后还有一个很重要的事情要交代:任何游记,对于景点的环境描写是必不可少的部分,这里可要写得细致生动哦。
四年级作文游记写法如下:
这一次出去游玩,我最开心的就是去海洋公园玩。在导游的带领下,我走进了透明的海底隧道,然后看见了五颜六色、形态各异的鱼儿,看见了老态龙钟的海龟,看见了顽皮可爱的小鲨鱼。你瞧!一群金黄和银白相间的鱼左右摆动地游到我们那里,表示欢迎。
最让我感兴差掘趣的是去观看海洋剧场。有虚裂核简单快乐的水上芭蕾表演,有触目惊心的跳水表演,有赏心悦目的海豚表演,最精彩的表演要数海豚表演了。然后工作人员请来了三只可爱的海豚,它们表演了“飞跃触球”、“凌空跳跃”、“做题拍尾”。
你看,然后天天海豚正在做数学算术题呢!工作人员拿来一块写着“3+2”的白板让天天做,它连续在水中用尾巴拍了几下表示题目答案,但答案错了。原先是天天海豚不喜欢工作人员出的算术题,它喜欢小朋友出题呀。
一个小男孩出了一道“5+3”的题。天天海豚看着题目欢快地游到水中,调皮地用尾巴拍了8下。哟!它还真答对了。顿时,海洋剧场响起了雷鸣般的掌声。时间过得真快,不知不觉已经到了傍晚。然后在老师的催促下,我们恋恋不舍地离开了海洋公园。
1. 英语作文《老师如何到我家》(英文版)
How to Get to Our House?
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I was told that you are going to make your summer visits to your students recently, and will e to our family next week. I am writing to you to express our sincere wele to you. As our apartment is somewhat secluded, I have to give you some directions before you e:
Take the Bus No. 330 to its northern terminal at the Yanxihu Stop. At getting off the bus go back about 100 meters, and you will see a gate leading to a large courtyard, and that is the Xihuyuan Residential Complex, where our apartment is situated in.
After entering the gate, take the right-hand road and walk to its end, our building, Building 16, is on your left side, the tower painted in light blue. Press the inter of our apartment, 2408, I will open the automatic door for you. Take the lift to the 24th Floor, turn left, and then left again, you will see our flat at the end of that corridor.
Call me if you lost your way, and I will e down to pick you up. My mobile phone number is: 012-345-6789.
I wish you to enjoy the trip, and will see you next week.
Yours,
Zhao Xiaodi
Junior 3-A
2. 老师如何从学校到达你家 英语作文Dear Miss White
Wele to our home. Now let me tell you how to get to my home. When you go out of our school. Turn left and walk on. There is No.366 Bus Stop. Get on the bus and get off at Xihongmen bus stop. Walk on and past a post office. Turn right at the traffic light. Walk along the road and you'll see lots of houses in front of you. The second house with white walls is my home. You can't miss it.
Yours
Lucy.
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3. 我的一个老师英语作文怎么写描写老师的英语作文
Miss Li is my Chinese teacher . She is about thirty years old . She is very pretty and young . Her hair is brown and curly .
Miss Li always wears a blue coat . I think her favourite colour will be blue .
Miss Li is very friendly and kindly .Her classes are very interesting ,we all like to have Chinese class .
She always *** iles when she speak to us .Sometimes she is very strict with us,when we make a mistake,she often makes us stand up . 李老师是我的语文老师,她大约30岁左右,她长的又漂亮,又年轻,她的卷发是棕色的。
Miss Li often sticks to have lessons when she is ill , She looked weak,but still beautiful . 李老师经常穿着蓝色的上衣,所以我认为她最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。
Miss Li love us very much, she teaches us so carefully .I think she is a good teacher. We all love her,too .
李老师对我们总是那样友好,亲切。她的课生动,有趣,我们都喜欢上语文课。她和我们说话的时候总是面带微笑。
有时候她对我们非常严厉,当我们犯了错误,李老师就让我们站起来。
I think teachers are like candles , giving off light for others by burning themselves 。 我想,老师就像蜡烛,燃烧了自己,照亮了别人!
4. 英语作文老师去学生家拜访的情况i went to visit my friend who lives nearby.i got up very early and arrived at his home at nine o'clock.he wasn't awake yet.i woke him up and went outside together after half an hour.we went to the nearest basketball court and played basketball for about o hours.then we walked to the gym which is a little bit far.we played badminton for one hour.when we were back home,both of us are happy and relaxed。
5. 描写英语老师的英语作文怎么写70词左右I have many teachers,but I like my Enlish teacher best.She is very beautoful.She have o big eyes and a *** all nose.She have a long hair .Her hair is yellow .Hre mouth is red like apple.All of my clas *** ates love my English teacher.。
6. 父母是我们的老师(英语作文)怎样写